Hi, today I'm going to tell me story to whoever read this and feel free to comment. So once upon a time there was a donkey called john he liked eating so he was very over weight. One day he went to donkey shop to get chocolate for himself, he liked his chocolate because it had tasty flavor like it tasted like peanuts but there was one thing which was bad he needed to get all the peanut flavored chocolate before a different animal comes to eat it but there was one particularly animal which was called Mr.Gorilla he was the bad guy. So one time he went to the super market and saw Donkey. Donkey likes to lie on the floor but he needs to go shopping cause his smart assistants doesn't know what flavor Donkey wants everyday like when donkey wants peanut flavor his smart assistant buys apple flavored chocolate. After a few days Donkey got sick of his smart assistant so he just got his friend to get his chocolate because his knows what chocolate he he likes. BYe
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Sunday, September 5, 2021
A story i made
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